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Da Fear Of Losing

Posted in Uncategorized by Bala on the August 21, 2006

Da fear of losing u is daunting me,
And dis shiver chills my spine.
Oh god am dreaded!
Dis thought fever is getting me sick

How to cure?
Ur friendship is da cream
of my life’s essence;
Very thick & tasty.

Ur care, ur cuddles, ur closeness:
The 3Cs, I always long 4
I crave for its shower ever.

Life is good, but with a friend like ya
its too good.
From wats wit a sip of coffee
to all dats wit leaps of time
V use to share,
Now am used to.

All dis long v hv never crossed any bitter times,
Evrythin was better… its as sweet as it can
If r time thread is unwound,
It has always been knotless,
still v knotted well

Those beautiful moments will turn into
beautiful memories.
dat inexpressible comfort
which I felt & sheltered
blew my worries away…

Even da very next second is dark,
better not to think,
how will I miss all dis…

Now life seems to be bad
an its too bad without ya..

Da pain of missin u
is hard to bear…

how I gona miss u , I dunno
but y I gona miss u
I think a part of u has grown in me
So am more then myself now

Lemme not think abt da depart
It may be in vision but not in hearts…
I don wana finish,
Neither dis verses nor our journey.
Hope it sails.

13 Responses to 'Da Fear Of Losing'

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  1. sunil said,

    on August 23, 2006 on 10:34 am

    holla bal,
    its a nicde one…….really touchin

  2. malli said,

    on August 23, 2006 on 10:36 am

    it was a good poem…good work man!

  3. ami said,

    on August 23, 2006 on 2:44 pm

    a touched feeling..
    a forgotten past..
    well woven in words
    arts of past..
    luv n hatred n hair n stair
    we shared it all
    n yet u dun kno..
    a heart of emotion and
    thoughts of luv,
    frenzship knows no bounds still..
    a empty stairway, n
    a broken window..
    d day u understan dis
    ul come back to….

    gr8 work,..tk cr..ami

  4. priya said,

    on December 14, 2006 on 11:54 am

    gr8 goin wit these verses….heart warming….
    perfect tint of it……
    wher fro u got tis intellect??fro mother’s womb??
    charismatic!!!! hats off!!!

  5. Gokulakrishnan said,

    on March 12, 2007 on 6:48 am

    WOW………..super gr8 work.

  6. SsSsSsSsss.... said,

    on April 9, 2007 on 4:41 pm

    FUCKIN WORDS I HATE THESE CHUTIYE POEMS !!!

  7. nikki said,

    on May 18, 2007 on 10:52 am

    ..dont wanna say much…
    ….i jus luv it..

  8. amie said,

    on May 22, 2007 on 10:36 am

    its a very touching poem indeed…………..

  9. Ranjani said,

    on July 29, 2007 on 10:44 am

    Hi

    I stumbled upon your site accidentally.Nice blog you’ve got there.Well,your poems are really good but don’t you think using “this” instead of “dis” will bring more accolades?At least i reckon so!

  10. lavanya said,

    on December 16, 2007 on 4:47 am

    awesome poem budddy…!! keep rocking….

  11. lis said,

    on December 31, 2007 on 4:35 pm

    nikki is an idiot dont listen to that fag. ur poem is very good.

  12. lis said,

    on December 31, 2007 on 4:37 pm

    sorry not nikki but The SsSsSsSsssS guy.
    Very sorry Nikki

  13. Eman said,

    on January 19, 2008 on 9:43 am

    U made me see a new meanings of a friend :-)
    Tnx 4 dat.

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