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Luv Hurts…

Posted in Uncategorized by Bala on the August 23, 2006

My luv is too big for me to care about

but its too small for u to think about…

 

Thou my nights r colorful wit Ur dreams

still my days mourn in ur absence.

 

Even in a strand of Ur hair, I see my luv

but u glimpse my luv as a strand of hair…

 

Ur words are octets and Ur silence is my sonnet.

still it portrays only elegiacs

 

U mean so much & I care dat much

nothing I expect, & am set aback

better I watch u from there

so far yet so near…

 

Not all gestures of love

strokes of ur lash will do

i’ll be fulfilled

 

Wen I think of luv, I think of U

both hurt me,

Luv hurts me wit U,

and U hurt me witout luv

 

18 Responses to 'Luv Hurts…'

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  1. anandiyer said,

    on August 28, 2006 on 5:17 am

    really touching thing dude… i understand how many love failures u ve had… hope u get one soon….

  2. Muneeb said,

    on August 31, 2006 on 8:05 am

    great poem! :)

  3. saba said,

    on September 11, 2006 on 8:10 am

    very touchy, straight from the heart but it pains…

  4. christine peruth .A said,

    on October 23, 2006 on 10:05 am

    thats surely touchy.feels some how true in ma llfe too.

  5. Bhakti said,

    on December 21, 2006 on 8:50 am

    very very good poeam .. indeed.

  6. polo said,

    on April 26, 2007 on 10:24 am

    its true & its painfull

  7. murni munira said,

    on April 30, 2007 on 4:14 pm

    wow…the luvly poem..

  8. Cadie said,

    on May 8, 2007 on 8:35 pm

    Wow amazing………hard when u feel someone doesnt love u as much as u love them…sad

  9. Brianna Robledo said,

    on November 2, 2007 on 4:25 pm

    i just want you to know that this is exactly how i feel about my ex-boyfriend. He broke up with me cuz he doesnt want a reason to be homesick when he is gone to the Air Force. It hurts so bad and this is the perfect poem for the way i feel

  10. anisha said,

    on January 25, 2008 on 7:11 am

    yeah its true lve really hurts……………….
    evry good poem

  11. Maria said,

    on February 8, 2008 on 4:46 am

    this is so true about love

  12. kate said,

    on February 16, 2008 on 4:25 am

    this is a nice peom i can fill your pane
    i’m going throu something like this rite now
    i fill very up set rite now

  13. Maath said,

    on March 7, 2008 on 1:49 am

    really really touchy…….wow…..i wonder where u get those words…hehehe

  14. Yessenia said,

    on March 17, 2008 on 3:22 pm

    thats a very touching poem n i feel ur pain

  15. Nargiza said,

    on April 7, 2008 on 4:07 am

    I really Like This Poem, its really touching

  16. Reyes said,

    on April 7, 2008 on 4:08 am

    Wow, I love this poem, I feel the same :(

  17. Balaji said,

    on May 12, 2008 on 6:18 am

    really super dude…full of feelings…

  18. Arjun V said,

    on May 13, 2008 on 3:30 am

    Nice poem..But in my opinion, Love is beautiful & most precious thing in the world. Don’t waste it for someone who doesn’t know its value. Instead give yourself & your love to someone who needs it.

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