Da Fear Of Losing

Da fear of losing u is daunting me,
And dis shiver chills my spine.
Oh god am dreaded!
Dis thought fever is getting me sick

How to cure?
Ur friendship is da cream
of my life’s essence;
Very thick & tasty.

Ur care, ur cuddles, ur closeness:
The 3Cs, I always long 4
I crave for its shower ever.

Life is good, but with a friend like ya
its too good.
From wats wit a sip of coffee
to all dats wit leaps of time
V use to share,
Now am used to.

All dis long v hv never crossed any bitter times,
Evrythin was better… its as sweet as it can
If r time thread is unwound,
It has always been knotless,
still v knotted well

Those beautiful moments will turn into
beautiful memories.
dat inexpressible comfort
which I felt & sheltered
blew my worries away…

Even da very next second is dark,
better not to think,
how will I miss all dis…

Now life seems to be bad
an its too bad without ya..

Da pain of missin u
is hard to bear…

how I gona miss u , I dunno
but y I gona miss u
I think a part of u has grown in me
So am more then myself now

Lemme not think abt da depart
It may be in vision but not in hearts…
I don wana finish,
Neither dis verses nor our journey.
Hope it sails.

  1. sunil
    August 23, 2006 at 10:34 am | #1

    holla bal,
    its a nicde one…….really touchin

  2. malli
    August 23, 2006 at 10:36 am | #2

    it was a good poem…good work man!

  3. ami
    August 23, 2006 at 2:44 pm | #3

    a touched feeling..
    a forgotten past..
    well woven in words
    arts of past..
    luv n hatred n hair n stair
    we shared it all
    n yet u dun kno..
    a heart of emotion and
    thoughts of luv,
    frenzship knows no bounds still..
    a empty stairway, n
    a broken window..
    d day u understan dis
    ul come back to….

    gr8 work,..tk cr..ami

  4. priya
    December 14, 2006 at 11:54 am | #4

    gr8 goin wit these verses….heart warming….
    perfect tint of it……
    wher fro u got tis intellect??fro mother’s womb??
    charismatic!!!! hats off!!!

  5. Gokulakrishnan
    March 12, 2007 at 6:48 am | #5

    WOW………..super gr8 work.

  6. SsSsSsSsss….
    April 9, 2007 at 4:41 pm | #6

    FUCKIN WORDS I HATE THESE CHUTIYE POEMS !!!

  7. nikki
    May 18, 2007 at 10:52 am | #7

    ..dont wanna say much…
    ….i jus luv it..

  8. amie
    May 22, 2007 at 10:36 am | #8

    its a very touching poem indeed…………..

  9. July 29, 2007 at 10:44 am | #9

    Hi

    I stumbled upon your site accidentally.Nice blog you’ve got there.Well,your poems are really good but don’t you think using “this” instead of “dis” will bring more accolades?At least i reckon so!

  10. December 16, 2007 at 4:47 am | #10

    awesome poem budddy…!! keep rocking….

  11. lis
    December 31, 2007 at 4:35 pm | #11

    nikki is an idiot dont listen to that fag. ur poem is very good.

  12. lis
    December 31, 2007 at 4:37 pm | #12

    sorry not nikki but The SsSsSsSsssS guy.
    Very sorry Nikki

  13. Eman
    January 19, 2008 at 9:43 am | #13

    U made me see a new meanings of a friend :-)
    Tnx 4 dat.

  14. suresh
    November 27, 2008 at 6:19 am | #14

    it’s nice man…..best of luck

  15. March 26, 2010 at 9:23 am | #15

    Nice poems…very well written. Keep up da gud wrk.

  16. simran
    July 1, 2010 at 5:19 pm | #16

    very good

  17. August 4, 2010 at 12:35 pm | #17

    it is very beautiful one. i felt so good.i like pink very much.

  18. sweetu
    September 24, 2010 at 1:47 pm | #18

    its beautifull………..

  19. Uday Kumar
    November 15, 2010 at 5:39 am | #19

    Dear,
    Itz really heart touching.

  20. anita rai
    March 24, 2011 at 4:30 pm | #20

    nice

  21. March 24, 2011 at 4:33 pm | #21

    Da fear of losing u is daunting me,
    And dis shiver chills my spine.
    Oh god am dreaded!
    Dis thought fever is getting me sick

    How to cure?
    Ur friendship is da cream
    of my life’s essence;
    Very thick & tasty.

    Ur care, ur cuddles, ur closeness:
    The 3Cs, I always long 4
    I crave for its shower ever.

    Life is good, but with a friend like ya
    its too good.
    From wats wit a sip of coffee
    to all dats wit leaps of time
    V use to share,
    Now am used to.

    All dis long v hv never crossed any bitter times,
    Evrythin was better… its as sweet as it can
    If r time thread is unwound,
    It has always been knotless,
    still v knotted well

    Those beautiful moments will turn into
    beautiful memories.
    dat inexpressible comfort
    which I felt & sheltered
    blew my worries away…

    Even da very next second is dark,
    better not to think,
    how will I miss all dis…

    Now life seems to be bad
    an its too bad without ya..

    Da pain of missin u
    is hard to bear…

    how I gona miss u , I dunno
    but y I gona miss u
    I think a part of u has grown in me
    So am more then myself now

    Lemme not think abt da depart
    It may be in vision but not in hearts…
    I don wana finish,
    Neither dis verses nor our journey.
    Hope it sails.
    it really nice

  22. October 16, 2011 at 11:17 am | #22

    touching 1

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