God created mother coz

He can’t be present everywhere…

But I feel god made mother coz,

He can’t fill that place…

 

never have I learnt anything

than in her cradle

 

never I felt any love,

than in her cuddle…

 

the stairway to heaven in her mothers lap

the doorway of love is in her eyes

 

safer were the days

where I clasp her hands  and stroll…

 

friends stands nowhere in sharing,

even god lags in wen it comes  abt caring…

its mother..

 

a day might come where

friendship may fade away

love may  droop off

wen u turn back, she will be there

wit arms open to say

come my dear!

 

da only heart which will luv u

even if u hate,

da only being in this world,

which takes all da pain, for ur gain…

 

u cry, she will cry,

u laugh, she laughs,

u love, she loves

u hate, still she loves…

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ma, hold my hands

coz.. if i hold, ya  chances r there, dat I might loose u,

but by all means I know,

by no means u will loose me…

 

the beauty that an angel envy,

the smile that all da flowers in world cant,

her words which hems in all meaning…

 

 

20 Responses to “Mother…”

  1. ami Says:

    a touched feeling..
    a forgotten past..
    well woven in words
    arts of past..
    luv n hatred n hair n stair
    we shared it all
    n yet u dun kno..
    a heart of emotion and
    thoughts of luv,
    frenzship knows no bounds still..
    a empty stairway, n
    a broken window..
    d day u understan dis
    ul come back to….

    gr8 work,..tk cr..ami

  2. Bilagi Prashant Says:

    ” ma, hold my hands

    coz.. if i hold, ya chances r there, dat I might loose u,

    but by all means I know,

    by no means u will loose me..”

    it’s just great thinking about a great person of the world.
    keep writng about the great person ‘mother!!’

  3. Siobhan Campbell Says:

    This peom is a great to give to your mother on her birthday

  4. shiv shashidharan Says:

    artistic license shant confer u with the right to rape syntax the way u did, but fuck me over, that was the best ive read in a while…like the be faithful to ur feelings than rules bit…keep up the good work chuth.

  5. rachel Says:

    i drive to school everyday. do you?

  6. Anisha Says:

    Hi Bala,

    It’s a touching and great song!

    But I wud like to say that we can never compare God with anything else….Ofcourse I love my mother very much, but I cant praise her as God, or compare her to God’s status, cos she, again is a creature…and the creator stands above all!

    You know, we all have mothers and every mother is loved by her children more than anything else, but the Love of God is greater than mother’s. He is the one who gave such a loving mother to you, He will be the one who will give another such a mom to your child and He is the one who places love in their heart and He is the one who fills respect and love within you for your mother, indeed mothers have a special place in God’s eyes…..yet they can never be God!!

    Worship the Creator!
    Not His Creations!!

  7. vengat Says:

    nice poetry….

  8. axinia Says:

    Such a deep understaning of Mother, Bala!

    Rreally, you must have been a saint in your past life…

  9. s.sudarshan Says:

    can i take this for my mother please my friend

  10. mk Says:

    i love it it makes me miss having a mother……. great job

  11. Richard Says:

    Very nice Bala,I can’t Imagine

  12. may ann saberon Says:

    hi….ma
    hold my hand wer ever i go.. coz i know i can’t live with out u by my side…
    tnz… 4 every things…dat u give & bles 4 me….
    LOVE U….
    may_ann

  13. Bertie Says:

    Very apt.

    Matha, Pidha,Guru,Deivam.

    Cheers

    Bertie

  14. sidrah Says:

    hy its a great poem
    i lost my mom
    she died
    i really miss my mom

  15. Marvin Says:

    it makes me miss having a mother i really love my mom….try to give this poem to ur mother,mom,mommy,grandmother,nanay,inay,nay….sure for u they will love it…

  16. priya Says:

    hi its very nice i really love my mom……….
    mummy i love u ………….

  17. priyanka (nancy) Says:

    its very beautiful i really love my mom……….
    mummy i love u ………….

  18. priyanka (nancy) Says:

    i love u mummy

  19. Mastan Oli Says:

    bala,
    Again superb poem. Wow really wonderful. All your poems are superb. But this is extraordinary. I love my mother.

    The following words 100% true,

    But I feel god made mother coz,

    He can’t fill that place…

    Take care bala.
    Mastan Oli


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