Mother…
God created mother coz
He can’t be present everywhere…
But I feel god made mother coz,
He can’t fill that place…
never have I learnt anything
than in her cradle
never I felt any love,
than in her cuddle…
the stairway to heaven in her mothers lap
the doorway of love is in her eyes
safer were the days
where I clasp her hands and stroll…
friends stands nowhere in sharing,
even god lags in wen it comes abt caring…
its mother..
a day might come where
friendship may fade away
love may droop off
wen u turn back, she will be there
wit arms open to say
come my dear!
da only heart which will luv u
even if u hate,
da only being in this world,
which takes all da pain, for ur gain…
u cry, she will cry,
u laugh, she laughs,
u love, she loves
u hate, still she loves…
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ma, hold my hands
coz.. if i hold, ya chances r there, dat I might loose u,
but by all means I know,
by no means u will loose me…
the beauty that an angel envy,
the smile that all da flowers in world cant,
her words which hems in all meaning…
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a touched feeling..
a forgotten past..
well woven in words
arts of past..
luv n hatred n hair n stair
we shared it all
n yet u dun kno..
a heart of emotion and
thoughts of luv,
frenzship knows no bounds still..
a empty stairway, n
a broken window..
d day u understan dis
ul come back to….
gr8 work,..tk cr..ami
” ma, hold my hands
coz.. if i hold, ya chances r there, dat I might loose u,
but by all means I know,
by no means u will loose me..”
it’s just great thinking about a great person of the world.
keep writng about the great person ‘mother!!’
This peom is a great to give to your mother on her birthday
artistic license shant confer u with the right to rape syntax the way u did, but fuck me over, that was the best ive read in a while…like the be faithful to ur feelings than rules bit…keep up the good work chuth.
i drive to school everyday. do you?
Hi Bala,
It’s a touching and great song!
But I wud like to say that we can never compare God with anything else….Ofcourse I love my mother very much, but I cant praise her as God, or compare her to God’s status, cos she, again is a creature…and the creator stands above all!
You know, we all have mothers and every mother is loved by her children more than anything else, but the Love of God is greater than mother’s. He is the one who gave such a loving mother to you, He will be the one who will give another such a mom to your child and He is the one who places love in their heart and He is the one who fills respect and love within you for your mother, indeed mothers have a special place in God’s eyes…..yet they can never be God!!
Worship the Creator!
Not His Creations!!
nice poetry….
Such a deep understaning of Mother, Bala!
Rreally, you must have been a saint in your past life…
can i take this for my mother please my friend
i love it it makes me miss having a mother……. great job
Very nice Bala,I can’t Imagine
hi….ma
hold my hand wer ever i go.. coz i know i can’t live with out u by my side…
tnz… 4 every things…dat u give & bles 4 me….
LOVE U….
may_ann
Very apt.
Matha, Pidha,Guru,Deivam.
Cheers
Bertie
hy its a great poem
i lost my mom
she died
i really miss my mom
it makes me miss having a mother i really love my mom….try to give this poem to ur mother,mom,mommy,grandmother,nanay,inay,nay….sure for u they will love it…
hi its very nice i really love my mom……….
mummy i love u ………….
its very beautiful i really love my mom……….
mummy i love u ………….
i love u mummy
bala,
Again superb poem. Wow really wonderful. All your poems are superb. But this is extraordinary. I love my mother.
The following words 100% true,
But I feel god made mother coz,
He can’t fill that place…
Take care bala.
Mastan Oli
its just too fantastic.so simple in words yet so deep,widout any ornaments yet so beautiful………………. no one in this cosmos can be compared to her. plz write one more for me…………………
well said!!!!
itz really a touchin poem
and we hv 2 obey our momz coz momz r rite n we ll go on rite way
n we ll b succesed in our lives
so never 4get ur mom b4 takin any decisions
THANK U
WONDERFULLL ….. WRITTEN SUPER…. HATS OFF
Superb yaar,,,….!!!
Miss U Maa:(
nice…. yar
Hey this is really nice my mom would love this. I miss my mom alot and everyday i call her everyday just to tell her that i love her and that i miss her. You are really at this you have a really good talent and ust it wise. You write really good poems were they have meaning and touching
ya der is a chances of i may loose u but der is no chances dat u liv my hand in any dificulties..i remember my days wn i was kid nd in my mom’s cradle dat i was so sure i was safe wn she ws unsafe…she forgets her pain nd laughs wit me…she never made me alone to stay..she treats me as her friend…ya frnds can reject me,love can fall down bt der is a person wo always der wit open harms nd cal her for deep hug nd says iam always der for u…der is nothing greater dan mothers love…thank u mom for everything i love u nd i miss u…
poet cant b cum a poet until composition of poem is not composed on mother.
I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
YOU MOM
i will do anything for my sweet mom ………bcoz.. i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee u mom
my sis would copy it and gave it to my mom and i think my mom would cry
that is a really touching poem you should always be proud to have a mother like your own
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why u use he for mother ?
I Luv This Poem And I Luv My MUM LuvU MOM!
what a very touching poem.. as I read this poem it touched my heart.. these lines touched my heart u cry, she will cry,
u laugh, she laughs,
u love, she loves
u hate, still she loves…
ma, hold my hands
coz.. if i hold, ya chances r there, dat I might loose u,
but by all means I know,
by no means u will loose me…
who evr read this…………………………..!!!!!!!!!!!