Never a day went tout u in my thoughts,

Never a night was spent tout u in my dreams;

I feel u in my every nerve, as a fruitful verve:

I know u r someone’s bird,

Still I love to watch u fly

Thou not in my skies.

not a hug to Ur wisp

but a feel of Ur strand when u flock

will be everything for me.

I ought to posses’ u all my life, but what to do

Only my thoughts r lucky enough.

so why should I be possessive of one

which I don even possess …

yeah I know U are my most irresistible desire

to be irresistibly desired.

but do I deserve???

 

 

 

 

 

8 Responses to “Its all About Luv”

  1. Tauseef Says:

    Wow, nice piece of feeling Bala, really simply expressive enough. The comparison is really wonderful i feel

  2. Dev Says:

    TRUTH OF LIFE..!!

    BUT DON’T TAKE UR LIFE SERIOUSLY………… ….U WON’T ESCAPE IT ALIVE ANYWAY….

    REGDS ALWAYS….

  3. rhea Says:

    I really like your poems. All of them!
    I remember my boyfriend that always said
    ‘do I deserve??’ when we had mad each other.
    This one is my favourite!

  4. himanshu Says:

    sir….i jus like to say that u know the core of love…..

  5. Eman Says:

    Sure :-) Sure :-)
    U deserve ittttttttt.

  6. keanna Says:

    you deserve! i think every one asks them self that question i dont know if every one does deserve that specail someone. if they asked you out and you feel the same way about each other and life is great i belive that you do deserve them. i’ve wonder and he says i do deserve him.

  7. susheeling Says:

    u know how to write man..i love ya poem.tkr

  8. aseel Says:

    its so so beautiful so beautiful
    keep it up
    I love it
    Love is Love
    i love my love
    my love is you
    so i love you


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