Never a day went tout u in my thoughts,
Never a night was spent tout u in my dreams;
I feel u in my every nerve, as a fruitful verve:
I know u r someone’s bird,
Still I love to watch u fly
Thou not in my skies.
not a hug to Ur wisp
but a feel of Ur strand when u flock
will be everything for me.
I ought to posses’ u all my life, but what to do
Only my thoughts r lucky enough.
so why should I be possessive of one
which I don even possess …
yeah I know U are my most irresistible desire
to be irresistibly desired.
but do I deserve???

April 1, 2007 at 4:20 am
Wow, nice piece of feeling Bala, really simply expressive enough. The comparison is really wonderful i feel
September 25, 2007 at 7:58 pm
TRUTH OF LIFE..!!
BUT DON’T TAKE UR LIFE SERIOUSLY………… ….U WON’T ESCAPE IT ALIVE ANYWAY….
REGDS ALWAYS….
October 21, 2007 at 5:08 am
I really like your poems. All of them!
I remember my boyfriend that always said
‘do I deserve??’ when we had mad each other.
This one is my favourite!
December 16, 2007 at 3:37 pm
sir….i jus like to say that u know the core of love…..
January 19, 2008 at 9:53 am
Sure
Sure 
U deserve ittttttttt.
July 9, 2008 at 7:23 pm
you deserve! i think every one asks them self that question i dont know if every one does deserve that specail someone. if they asked you out and you feel the same way about each other and life is great i belive that you do deserve them. i’ve wonder and he says i do deserve him.
October 13, 2008 at 4:07 am
u know how to write man..i love ya poem.tkr
November 15, 2008 at 1:43 pm
its so so beautiful so beautiful
keep it up
I love it
Love is Love
i love my love
my love is you
so i love you