Its all About Luv

 

 

Never a day went tout u in my thoughts,

Never a night was spent tout u in my dreams;

I feel u in my every nerve, as a fruitful verve:

I know u r someone’s bird,

Still I love to watch u fly

Thou not in my skies.

not a hug to Ur wisp

but a feel of Ur strand when u flock

will be everything for me.

I ought to posses’ u all my life, but what to do

Only my thoughts r lucky enough.

so why should I be possessive of one

which I don even possess …

yeah I know U are my most irresistible desire

to be irresistibly desired.

but do I deserve???

 

 

 

 

 

  1. Tauseef
    April 1, 2007 at 4:20 am | #1

    Wow, nice piece of feeling Bala, really simply expressive enough. The comparison is really wonderful i feel

  2. Dev
    September 25, 2007 at 7:58 pm | #2

    TRUTH OF LIFE..!!

    BUT DON’T TAKE UR LIFE SERIOUSLY………… ….U WON’T ESCAPE IT ALIVE ANYWAY….

    REGDS ALWAYS….

  3. rhea
    October 21, 2007 at 5:08 am | #3

    I really like your poems. All of them!
    I remember my boyfriend that always said
    ‘do I deserve??’ when we had mad each other.
    This one is my favourite!

  4. himanshu
    December 16, 2007 at 3:37 pm | #4

    sir….i jus like to say that u know the core of love…..

  5. Eman
    January 19, 2008 at 9:53 am | #5

    Sure :-) Sure :-)
    U deserve ittttttttt.

  6. keanna
    July 9, 2008 at 7:23 pm | #6

    you deserve! i think every one asks them self that question i dont know if every one does deserve that specail someone. if they asked you out and you feel the same way about each other and life is great i belive that you do deserve them. i’ve wonder and he says i do deserve him.

  7. susheeling
    October 13, 2008 at 4:07 am | #7

    u know how to write man..i love ya poem.tkr

  8. aseel
    November 15, 2008 at 1:43 pm | #8

    its so so beautiful so beautiful
    keep it up
    I love it
    Love is Love
    i love my love
    my love is you
    so i love you

  9. Jazz
    July 26, 2010 at 7:50 pm | #9

    “I know u r someone’s bird,

    Still I love to watch u fly ”

    awesome Mannnn… ” so why should I be possessive of one

    which I don even possess …”. hats off for these lines… ;)

  10. Neha
    February 1, 2011 at 9:02 am | #10

    ITS A VERY NICE POEM IT TOUCHED 2 MY HEART

  11. rpkaran
    January 27, 2012 at 5:28 am | #11

    nice

  12. March 28, 2012 at 10:16 pm | #12

    i love it

  13. March 28, 2012 at 10:17 pm | #13

    sup

    yaya

  14. March 28, 2012 at 10:17 pm | #14

    text me plez ok

  15. Habibullah Dar
    December 25, 2012 at 1:02 pm | #15

    Heart touching….

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