garmiyen harkten nakam se jal jaten hai hum chirago ki tarah shaan se jaljaten hai shama jo sath me jalti hai rumais ke liye hum usi aag me gum naam se jal jaten hai aur jab bhi aata hai tera naam mere naam ke sath jane kyun log mere naam se jal jaten hai,
Ashish Kumar Maurya
Friend of Shashi Maurya
No doubt this poem is beutiful,but is there any true love in this world? I never beleived in love and was busy in my studies. Then someone came in my life. Taught me about love, I started loving her and then one day she broke me badly even i was not the one who went behind her. Unable to understand till now if she was supposed to do the same then why she came in my life?
I LOVE HASSAN ALOT I LOVE HIM VERY VERY SO MUCH THAT I COULD EVEN DIE FOR HIM.I WISH 2 GOD THAT I NO THAT IN THIS LIFETIME HE CANT BE MINEBUT IF I EVER GET TO LOVE SM1 IN MA NEXT LIFE PLEASE LET IT BE MA HASS CAUSE HE IS THA REASON THAT AM STILL ALIVE AND IF WONT BE WIV MW THAN THERE IS NO POINT THAT I NEED 2 BE ALIVE. BUT I DNT NO IF HE LVS ME THE SAME WAY CAUSE WHEN EVA WE MEET EACH OTHA IF SM1 IS AROUND HE DSNT TK PROPLY WIV ME BUT IF SM1 IS NT THEN HE DS AND WE EVEN HAD SEX 1NC WE CAME REALLY CLOSE 2 EACH OTHA THAT I DID WANTED 2 STP MA SLF BT COUDNT AND GOT CARRIED AWAY AND NEXT MORRNIN I FOUND OUT THAT HE WAS DRUNK AND DID’NT REMEMBR NOTHIN I WAS HEART BROKEN AND STILL AM BUT I STILL LOVE HIM IN THA DEPTH OF MA HEART.AND CAUSE OF WHICH I FEEL REALLY BAD WIV MA SELF IF ANY 1 4RM U CAN TELL ME THAT IF IT OR INST TRUE LUV AND WAHT CAN I DO 2 MAKE HIM MINE IT IS NT IMPORTANT THT HE HV 2 BE MINE. I JUST WANT HIM 2 BE HAPPY WIV AN1 ONE EITHER WIV ME OR WIVOUT:( ME THIS IS MA MSN (MARIN_ZAFAR@hotmail.com)WELL WT 2 SAY BUT THERE IS LITTLE SMIN I WROTE ABOUT MA FEELING TOWARD TRUE LOVE:
LOVE IS WHEN U R APPRICIATED WIVOUT BEING TOLD
LOVE IS A DEEP EMOTION WHICH ONLY GIVES U SORROW
SUMTIMES IT DOSE GIVE U A LITTLE SMILE
BUT FOR THE REST OF UR LIFE THAT WILL MAKE U CRY
LOVE IS A DESIRE THAT EVE1 HV
LUV IS A FEELING WHICH IS
COLD AS A BREEZE OF AIR
LOVE IS HOT AS SUN’S RAY’S
LOVE IS DARK AS THE SHADOW IN THE NITE
AND IS BRIGHT AS THE LIGHT IN A DAY TIME
LOVE GIVES U ALL THA HAPPINES THAT U WANT CAPTURE THOSE MOMMENT’S TIME’ FEELING’ EMOTIONS’ LOVE AND EVERY THING IN YOUR HEART BECAUSE TRUE LOVE NEVER FINDES SAME PATH.(WAY)
HP U ALL WILL LIKE IT
O-M-G That was all true no lie! I agree that love is the most beautiful thang in the world.
ya’ll know that’s true. any body knows the color of LOVE is PINK . L-O! L-O! L-O! L-O-V-E!
LOVE Is Natural gift of GOD But if know any person what is LOVE that was fag,and mad.Love makes a man to every person. LOVE is LIFE. Love Is Beauty.LOVEis gold. I LOVE You And your coments.
It’s very very nice . I hope you have nice poems in all days .
LOVE is like the HEAVEN. It so hard to FIND . . . . @};-
maybe we never get what we want , or never want what we get . Maybe we never have what we like ,or never like what we have .
But …
Still we live …
Still we LOVE …
still we HOPE …
And This is life ….
April 9, 2007 at 8:54 pm
bahut ki khoob surat likha hai aap ne … i realy liked you peom and ur way of presentation
May 19, 2007 at 12:30 pm
garmiyen harkten nakam se jal jaten hai hum chirago ki tarah shaan se jaljaten hai shama jo sath me jalti hai rumais ke liye hum usi aag me gum naam se jal jaten hai aur jab bhi aata hai tera naam mere naam ke sath jane kyun log mere naam se jal jaten hai,
Ashish Kumar Maurya
Friend of Shashi Maurya
July 18, 2007 at 2:45 am
I enjoy every bit of your poemsm
July 21, 2007 at 10:14 am
“life is too long,with out you”.
the track says to train
August 7, 2007 at 3:28 am
yesss. dat’s true the life is to long….
October 5, 2007 at 2:01 am
Hello , couldn’t get the last part but nice at all…
A question Where are you from ?
October 6, 2007 at 1:25 pm
Color of Love
October 13, 2007 at 5:03 am
love it……u’ve got nyc poems hir…..kip it up..its soOo inspiring……love lots!……pls. add me…kanny_bluepop05@yahoo.com…enx..
November 9, 2007 at 9:07 am
pink is pretty,beauty,innocence,simple,sexy!!
And its Girlie!!
November 15, 2007 at 12:38 pm
realllyyyyyyy niceeee……..
November 21, 2007 at 8:35 pm
i love ben
November 21, 2007 at 8:36 pm
i think my boyfriend is sexy i love he we are merry
November 22, 2007 at 12:35 am
yeaH! its a good poem! kip 8 reAL
November 23, 2007 at 5:16 am
pink….
it’s so nice
November 24, 2007 at 11:55 am
i really love it…
i love pink…..
pink rule!!!!!!!!!!!
November 26, 2007 at 8:57 pm
u ar crazy…all of u!
November 27, 2007 at 5:15 pm
i enjoyed yo poem keep up the good work!!!
November 27, 2007 at 7:08 pm
Beautiful explanation,
November 28, 2007 at 8:18 pm
it was like nursry poems,simple and innocence
bue nice at the same time
November 30, 2007 at 6:08 am
pink is a very sweet & cute colour …mostly girls like itt.but i am sure after reading your poem even boys will like ittt!!!!!
November 30, 2007 at 11:15 am
PINK????it’s girls’s favorite color.
December 1, 2007 at 8:32 am
wow what a poem i love it
December 1, 2007 at 2:51 pm
i didnt get it
December 8, 2007 at 3:48 am
dont for get your draem …
December 12, 2007 at 3:11 pm
i love this poem!
December 15, 2007 at 6:09 am
YOUE TO SAYRI SABHI KIYA KARTE HAI. PAR DIL SE BAHUT KAM KIYA KARTE HAI,HUM TO WO CHIJ HAI JO DI SE BHI KARTE HAI,AUR DIMAG SE BHI. “aadab” jnab”
December 15, 2007 at 6:15 am
I LOVE THIS POEM” very well”
khuda tumhe isi thraha achhi _2 poem se nwaje”
December 15, 2007 at 6:46 am
as you say pink colour is col. of love thats true
December 28, 2007 at 9:05 am
YOUE TO SAYRI SABHI KIYA KARTE HAI. PAR DIL SE BAHUT KAM KIYA KARTE HAI,HUM TO WO CHIJ HAI JO DI SE BHI KARTE HAI,AUR DIMAG SE BHI. “aadab” jnab”
January 6, 2008 at 4:17 pm
khili khoshkele!very nice
January 6, 2008 at 6:02 pm
love you always
January 9, 2008 at 5:17 am
this is the sweetiest poem ever i loved it
January 10, 2008 at 4:08 pm
Love the Poem!!!!
January 11, 2008 at 3:02 am
wtf this is the gayyest poem ive ever read seriously Pink…….wow im sry but thts not wut loves about this is hella STUPID!!!!!
January 11, 2008 at 5:58 am
i loved sahan .
but he didnt know it.
ooooh i cant to foget him
January 13, 2008 at 8:13 am
I luv poem so much.Poem make me feel very happy.Pink is my favourite colour.Pink is sweet and cute colour.Pink colour is cool.Pink is girl’s fav…}
January 15, 2008 at 9:12 pm
No doubt this poem is beutiful,but is there any true love in this world? I never beleived in love and was busy in my studies. Then someone came in my life. Taught me about love, I started loving her and then one day she broke me badly even i was not the one who went behind her. Unable to understand till now if she was supposed to do the same then why she came in my life?
January 18, 2008 at 1:08 am
I like this poem, that’s great!!!
January 18, 2008 at 7:58 pm
I LOVE HASSAN ALOT I LOVE HIM VERY VERY SO MUCH THAT I COULD EVEN DIE FOR HIM.I WISH 2 GOD THAT I NO THAT IN THIS LIFETIME HE CANT BE MINEBUT IF I EVER GET TO LOVE SM1 IN MA NEXT LIFE PLEASE LET IT BE MA HASS CAUSE HE IS THA REASON THAT AM STILL ALIVE AND IF WONT BE WIV MW THAN THERE IS NO POINT THAT I NEED 2 BE ALIVE. BUT I DNT NO IF HE LVS ME THE SAME WAY CAUSE WHEN EVA WE MEET EACH OTHA IF SM1 IS AROUND HE DSNT TK PROPLY WIV ME BUT IF SM1 IS NT THEN HE DS AND WE EVEN HAD SEX 1NC WE CAME REALLY CLOSE 2 EACH OTHA THAT I DID WANTED 2 STP MA SLF BT COUDNT AND GOT CARRIED AWAY AND NEXT MORRNIN I FOUND OUT THAT HE WAS DRUNK AND DID’NT REMEMBR NOTHIN I WAS HEART BROKEN AND STILL AM BUT I STILL LOVE HIM IN THA DEPTH OF MA HEART.AND CAUSE OF WHICH I FEEL REALLY BAD WIV MA SELF IF ANY 1 4RM U CAN TELL ME THAT IF IT OR INST TRUE LUV AND WAHT CAN I DO 2 MAKE HIM MINE IT IS NT IMPORTANT THT HE HV 2 BE MINE. I JUST WANT HIM 2 BE HAPPY WIV AN1 ONE EITHER WIV ME OR WIVOUT:( ME THIS IS MA MSN (MARIN_ZAFAR@hotmail.com)WELL WT 2 SAY BUT THERE IS LITTLE SMIN I WROTE ABOUT MA FEELING TOWARD TRUE LOVE:
LOVE IS WHEN U R APPRICIATED WIVOUT BEING TOLD
LOVE IS A DEEP EMOTION WHICH ONLY GIVES U SORROW
SUMTIMES IT DOSE GIVE U A LITTLE SMILE
BUT FOR THE REST OF UR LIFE THAT WILL MAKE U CRY
LOVE IS A DESIRE THAT EVE1 HV
LUV IS A FEELING WHICH IS
COLD AS A BREEZE OF AIR
LOVE IS HOT AS SUN’S RAY’S
LOVE IS DARK AS THE SHADOW IN THE NITE
AND IS BRIGHT AS THE LIGHT IN A DAY TIME
LOVE GIVES U ALL THA HAPPINES THAT U WANT CAPTURE THOSE MOMMENT’S TIME’ FEELING’ EMOTIONS’ LOVE AND EVERY THING IN YOUR HEART BECAUSE TRUE LOVE NEVER FINDES SAME PATH.(WAY)
HP U ALL WILL LIKE IT
October 21, 2009 at 1:27 pm
oye stupid ov the world. sex kr k maujen kr ri ho…….
love ho gya he tmen??????
naaiiiiiiiiiii sexairya ho gya he tmen……..
January 19, 2008 at 4:12 pm
hi,,,it’s very good…!!
i like it,tnx friend!!
bye.
January 23, 2008 at 6:22 am
I read your poem i like this poem very much actually i want to gift this poem to my loved once
January 23, 2008 at 10:31 pm
loved it it well cool add this if u want 2 tlk 2 me glitterbabes_sam@hotmail.com pwees add it
o yh pome sound as a pound lky u lot
January 24, 2008 at 5:26 pm
We live with the power of love
idont how i will live without it
January 26, 2008 at 8:01 am
woow! so cute n wonderful. rily love it
January 29, 2008 at 7:48 am
yeh very nice u have written my best wishes are with you keep it up
January 29, 2008 at 9:35 am
heeelllooo from bosna…love is the most beaudiful thing in the world… i love you
January 31, 2008 at 7:47 am
its a goood not so nice
February 3, 2008 at 5:27 am
Its really a lovely colour for love…. and its really a great feeling which is experienced from all those close ones of us….
February 4, 2008 at 6:36 am
Very nice
and thanks
February 6, 2008 at 10:14 am
I read your poem i am extreamly impressed to it i like this poem very much actually i want to gift this poem to my all friends and all relatives .
February 6, 2008 at 1:10 pm
yah right
February 8, 2008 at 6:11 pm
O-M-G That was all true no lie! I agree that love is the most beautiful thang in the world.
ya’ll know that’s true. any body knows the color of LOVE is PINK . L-O! L-O! L-O! L-O-V-E!
LOVE YA’LL
Kerrie
February 10, 2008 at 5:44 am
I love it I hope my luv too loves it
February 10, 2008 at 6:05 pm
LOVE Is Natural gift of GOD But if know any person what is LOVE that was fag,and mad.Love makes a man to every person. LOVE is LIFE. Love Is Beauty.LOVEis gold. I LOVE You And your coments.
February 12, 2008 at 4:14 pm
gooooooood
very gooooooood
very,very gooooooood
very,very,very gooooooood
very,very,very,very gooooooood
February 12, 2008 at 7:33 pm
I had no clue that love was that naturel thang. love is so beautiful. love is wonderful & My Girl Friend kerrie williams loves it. Well G2G
SINCERLY
Dylan Smith
February 14, 2008 at 12:50 pm
i love zhaffarri
February 15, 2008 at 2:10 pm
i just love this poem… oh my god….
jus too sweet…
great job who ever srote this:
love DUSHY
February 15, 2008 at 2:10 pm
i just love this poem… oh my god….
jus too sweet…
great job who ever srote this:
love DUSHY
February 21, 2008 at 3:30 pm
omg that is so sweet and the poem… good job.
February 24, 2008 at 6:45 am
pink, is my favorite colour………
February 24, 2008 at 8:53 am
I love pink and pink loves… Love is the best thing ever
February 29, 2008 at 6:29 pm
I just happened to be on the internet and wanted to drop by.I steal think the poem is wonderful
well G2G
love yall
Kerrie
March 5, 2008 at 3:16 am
hmm..seems..it is cool..
i love it..
by the way.. i need friends..
kenoks_22@yahoo.com
email me there
March 11, 2008 at 8:46 pm
I love to be your friend write me back ASAP
March 11, 2008 at 8:50 pm
Hi Every one I’am Tianna you can write me at sweet_tianna22@yahoo.com I’m always on So hit me up
March 11, 2008 at 8:59 pm
lots of love to the lovely ,lovely person who has written this lovly poem,love you soooooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!
March 12, 2008 at 4:22 am
nice…bravo…i lyk 8…
March 14, 2008 at 2:58 pm
awesome!!!
i love pink!!!
November 2, 2009 at 12:13 pm
hi dear that was likely to me….
April 2, 2008 at 6:12 pm
Pink!
pink!
Pink!
oh tats a colour. i got confused by reading ur poem.
April 2, 2008 at 9:32 pm
OMG … isn’t this MAGIC
June 21, 2008 at 1:23 pm
i like to a s girl
July 23, 2008 at 11:49 am
please call me 09365542855 my name is navid nikfarjam
August 26, 2008 at 5:04 am
Simon Peter,
Vaalnthaal unnodu thaan,
Illai mannodu thaan…..
With Love,
Ranjani
December 9, 2008 at 1:33 pm
superb!!!!
January 18, 2009 at 6:35 am
It’s very very nice . I hope you have nice poems in all days .
LOVE is like the HEAVEN. It so hard to FIND . . . . @};-
maybe we never get what we want , or never want what we get . Maybe we never have what we like ,or never like what we have .
But …
Still we live …
Still we LOVE …
still we HOPE …
And This is life ….
January 25, 2009 at 8:40 am
ew…I hate pink(red and black rule) and I’m an atheist.
February 7, 2009 at 5:25 am
nice………the man must be lucky……….
April 15, 2009 at 9:55 am
in this world beautiful word is love
April 15, 2009 at 9:57 am
love makes life
May 22, 2009 at 8:57 pm
Oh its really beautiful, I have never think this about pink…
June 25, 2009 at 4:10 pm
Heloo,how are you?
this web is nice
by
September 20, 2009 at 2:10 am
love is the best thing in the world